THE ADVENTURE OF THE GOLDEN PINCE NEZ
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I see different texts of the year 1984, It`s complicated because these texts contains a lot resources for choose the events that was very important in themselves. Also, to show the skills of the famous researcher, during a general scanning I can see the terrible deaths the Banker, the Addleton tragedy and the terrible episode of young Willoughby Smith.
During the storm, Holmes and I settled down on the table. He was focused in to discover the correct information. When, the windows were banging in the wind. I ran to the windows and I saw the street without people, It`s horrifying. So, Watson, said Holmes, is enough for this night.
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The wretched noise of the wheels of a carriage crashed on the floor and I felt creaked the door. What do you want? Suddenly, the young Stanley Hopkins appeared, is a future researcher. Is he in? he talked desperate. Get in on, Gentleman. Hopkins to climb the stairs, while Holmes hold on a blaze out.
Alright, my friend Hopkins I have some strategies for spend this cold night. Really, Mr, Holmes. I need to find clues about the Yoxley case in recent files; It`s one paragraph and we hasn`t found in yet? Don`t waste time in superfluous things. Well, this case is complicated.
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I can`t understand it ?
Is confused
Holmes was thinking about the cases, I can understand the information in comparison with the real case. Long time ago, the Yoxley Old Place, was used by an old man called Professor Coram, he was a disabled. This old man is famous for be a cultured reader, the Professor is creating a new master piece.
This text can to require a secretary, Besides, a young a man graduated from the university. Mr. Willougby Smith he got a good job. His work is write in the mornings during every week the old man`s dictates.
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A furious storm shook the windows, so, the promising detective with his low speech and step by step began an account of the facts. The Professor disappeared without clues. Smith ever was seen in this place and the other person aren`t involved in the case Yoxley old place.
Well, I want to share the information of Susan tarlton, this witness knows everything about this case. The maid Knows that the Professor and Smith were still in their rooms, but she listened strange sounds and after that a very quiet house.
The maid get in at the study, she saw the body of Smith Willoughby on the carpet without damaging effect on. Suddenly, she was scared because the blood in his neck means a serious injury.
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A previous impression, the maid said “the young Smith has die. But, he moved his eyes for a second and his first words was “the professor”, after that he lost the breath. The professor is suspicious, but, he said I heard a strange sound and he can`t to explain. The final words that involved to the professor, he said that in the agony he young Smith can be confused. Mr, Holmes thinks about of the theories for try to solve this case.
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Well, What was the strategy that the assassin go in the house?
Possibly, through the garden or backyard. The escape can give some clues for the humidity, the recent rain and the footprints on the garden. However, the criminal behaviour not leave footprints, the assassin was very carefully cautious, Holmes was desperate.
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The injury of the young man was made on the right side of the throat. The weapon was a few meters away from the body. Mr, Holmes looked with his glasses and scanned the information, he seems be interested in the case.
I infer from their delicacy, and from the last words of the dead man. Of course, I can understand their point of view, Holmes to hold on his glasses again.
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I understand clearly your speech, however, I`m not a qualified for received this information. I could be to study this case with more deep during a long time while I can catch the evidence easly. Hopkins said, the information and the clues were always in my face, but I never thought that to find of an easy way. Mr, Holmes, I think that you can understand a better way the case.
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The next day, the morning started with enormous snow on the streets, was a ugly morning for travelling to Yoxley Old place. And we back in the case with the clues “footprints” on the grass, the garden often kept open, also, the position of the knife off the writing table. Watson, I don`t tell me about the buried information, I need to know everything about the case not matter if it`s confused, I have available time.
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Well, now we have got small clues that to can help to understand the case. The young Willougby Smith go in the room, the blow is a fatal one and the maid? Could anyone have got away through that door after the time you heard the cry.
I refuse this theory, before I got down the stair, I don`t remember have seen anybody in the corridor. Also, the door was closed all the time.
Hi Camilo.
ResponderEliminarYour role as a writer has to be crossed by the insights of a regular reader. I mean, once you've caught the plot of the story, you'll be able to narrate and retell whatever you've read. And that's why it's important to assume the conceptions of paraphrasing and paragraph construction from a perspective of responsibility with the author and your readers.
Retelling isn't a matter of informal writing... it's a fact of identifying your possible readers, before sharing your personal construction.
I know you've trying to up-date with the course program, and it's necessary to watch carefully what you've done so far, how it has been done, and how it might be improved.
Where's vocabulary definition? categories? placement on the original text? your brainstorming graphic? Any proposal to construct your personal text?
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